Can a hard science fiction goofy comedy work?

When I first started writing my action comedy science fiction series The Cosmic Star I wasn’t sure how a hard science fiction goofy comedy would work. But now that I’ve finished the first 5 chapters I’m actually impressed with how its started to come together. The key was putting together a likeable cast that I enjoyed writing dialogue for and people got a kick out of. I have decided to take a hiatus from the series while I plan out the next 5 chapters (think of it as season 2) and those new chapters will probably appear in the fall. In the meantime however the first 5 chapters are available to read below.

Click on the image below to start reading my hard science fiction goofy comedy ‘The Cosmic Star’

 

hard science fiction goofy comedy

Cybertech Chapter 140 Core of Evil Now Available To Read For Free

Synopsis of Core of Evil

In Core of Evil Janice leads the fleet to break through the Celcar Fleet, while Kate and Yurgi attempt to stop the Celcar’s plan for universal domination.

Core of Evil Now Available To Read

Full Script of Core of Evil

Lets hope those changes we made to our weapons subspace matrix will be enough to break through their flux shields

All Ships Commence attack!!

Its like each ship has an unlimited amount of shield power

The drones are easy enough to dispatch but those damn Capital Ships

Enemy ships are sustaining only minimal Damage

Shit, they’re shields are just cycling through different dimensional planes

Let the Warcons handle the Capital Ships, All alliance ships focus on picking off the Drones

Were outnumbered 10 to 1 we need to make this a team effort

This is Mary Krosa, All Warcon Ships switch weapons to the upper frequency band of subspace

Send that setting to the alliance fleet

Sorry Mary, Our weapons don’t go that high into the subspace band

Well have to make due, beams have some effect but kinetic weapons are useless against them

5

They’re slicing through our lines like Hot Metal through Ice

The only ones keeping them at bay are the warcons and just barely

If they destroy this fleet the Warcons will be surrounded and won’t stand a chance!

Anyone got any ideas because Im at a loss if we can’t even Hurt them

Excellent, its a quantum singularity

Chapter 140 “Core of Evil”

Ready Yurgi

Lets turn this core into a rift

and then we can Rip this hive to pieces

You will not

You have gone too far as it is

Im not like the other Celcar Soldiers you dispatched

My power is drawn from the Combined Celcar Collective itself. You may call me the Celcar Node of this HIve

And from what I understand niether of you have access to your full powers

Yurgi!

9

You will pay for that Kate

Oh come on you’ve got 5 more

30% of our ships are either destroyed or heavily damaged admiral

The Celcars are overwhelming our lines

Get out of Here Janice, your ships really aren’t helping

Damnit

Well stay until My Mom and Dad Get out

We may have to withdraw or well loose the whole fleet

Your making me look bad kiddo, my tactical skills are a little rusty

and the only Job General McRand Will have is recovering the debris

Don’t Feel Bad Janice, we Warcons are just genetically superior Tacticians to Humans

13

Emicons!

Position our ships between the Celcar Fleet and the Alliance Ships!

Charge Arc Weapons for firing at the Celcar Center line

Celcar Ships are using Dimension 7 on their shield Matrix, set arc canon to that setting, 1 minute to full charge

Who the Hell are you Guys!!?

This is Fleet Admiral Fen Grison of the Emicon Alliance, I am here at the request of a Captain Alita

Roger That, Everyone form around the ships that look like toilet seats

If you can clean up the small fries, well help you deal with the Celcar Capital Ships

Where’s your ‘Wife’ Yurgi Krosa, did I so easily dispatch her simply by throwing her into the abyss

a Shield Matrix? of course a quantum singularity even that size is hundreds of millions of degrees outside the event horizon

If I can take out these generators radiation from that singularity will cook this hive within minutes

Nothing like a bit of a fever to wipe out a bacterial infection

Looks like we are the universes immune system

Kate! What are you doing?

Phew, almost fell into the super massive black hole

I haven’t had this much fun in decades

Yurgi, You ready Im going to send you some power straight from the galactic core

With Pleasure my love

Take note Celcar, I am General Yurgi Krosa

I am descended from the Pure blooded Tralians that originally established the Warcon Empire

I am one of very few naturally ascended Level 6 Warcons

17

Arc Cannons Charged!

Roger

Admiral Maty, concentrate all your weapons on the Celcar ships to your immediate Center line

Fire!!

120,000,000 enemy ships were within the field

Alright Admiral Maty, Celcar Ships are paper tigers without their advanced shields

You heard the Admiral all ships blow them out of my sky!

All Warcon Starships Exterminate these Parasitical Scum!

It doesn’t Matter what you are, compared to our collective power you are the real insects!

The energy I now gather comes from the collective itself!

I only need to keep enough of your Body intact to extract a small sample of DNA, even a strand of hair will do

Your race is now marked for extermination for challenging us!!

You die now Yurgi Krosa!

WHat!!

21

THere is an old Tralian saying that one ascended Tralian is dangerous

But Bring two together as husband and Wife

and love makes them unstoppable!!

We should get out of here Yurgi

I severed all the reactor Shield Generator Cables

The Core is going to overheat and melt down

Warning, core meltdown in progress, all celcar units evacuate hive immediately

What!!?

25

Janice, Mary, Admiral Grison get the fleets out of there

The Celcar Hive is going to explode

Affirmative, all ships commence emergency battlefield fold operation

28

We made it

Kate

The Celcar Fleet?

We Sent them a message today, don’t mess with us

They’re not interested in us anymore

Its time to bring General Brel and his fleet Kicking and screaming into the Tralian Republic

Unity is our only chance of standing against the Celcars

Set Course for the Triangulum Galaxy

To Be Continued…

Cybertech Motion Comic Episode 3

Cybertech Motion Comic Episode 3: I decided to start producing my webcomic series into short motion comic slideshows and posting them on Youtube. If you like a more visual presentation set to music as opposed to just reading it online check it out.

Ive been wanting to do this for a while and now just got started. Ill try to do one ever week or so. Check it out.

 

 

 

 

Cybertech Slideshow Comic Episode 1 on Youtube

Cybertech Slideshow Comic Episode 1

 

Cybertech Slideshow Comic Episode 1: I decided to start producing my webcomic series into short motion comic slideshows and posting them on Youtube. If you like a more visual presentation set to music as opposed to just reading it online check it out. Has some bonus 100% animated scenes that aren’t included in my webcomic.

Ive been wanting to do this for a while and now just got started. Ill try to do one ever week or so. Check it out.

Cybertech The Celcar Saga is truly epic on a universal scale

Cybertech The Celcar Saga is the most epic chapter of the series and is planned as the ultimate ending of the comic.

Check it out on my new comic website, and help me out by purchasing a digital download. You can also donate on patreon and get new pages immediately as I release them.

http:/cybertech.superwebcomics.com

Celcar Saga

Looking for Cybertech and The Cosmic Star?

Looking for Cybertech and The Cosmic Star? They have their own websites now, scroll down and follow the links to whatever comic hosting website you prefer. I decided to stop hosting all my comics on one website and gave them their own subdomains to keep them separate.

cybertech.superwebcomics.com

thecosmicstar.superwebcomics.com

Rogue, Star Trek Vigilante and Kim Possible Reloaded will follow shortly.

This will give me more control over the formats for each specific comic site and allow me to customize each site for the specific comic. Of course I host my comics on a number of other websites such as Smackjeeves, Tapastic and The Duck.

New Season of The Cosmic Star Coming Soon

New Season of The Cosmic Star Coming Soon

The comic that will start a full frontal assault on politically correctness will be coming back in the fall.

Ive been working on some new chapters of my Web Comic “The Cosmic Star” and will start posting it this fall. Get ready for some character development and some more quirky space opera related comedy. Not to mention that I’ve decided to take the PC gloves off so get ready for some very politically incorrect irreverent comedy.

New Season of The Cosmic Star Coming Soon